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Friday, October 2, 2015
On the Second Day of NaNo Prep my Novel Gave to Me...
Hey all! So today, I won't be rambling on and on about why you should join NaNoWriMo, I'll just get straight to the point.
On the Second Day of NaNo Prep my Novel gave to me… my Main Character.
I feel like character and plot play off of each other, and it doesn't particularly matter which on you start with, except for preferences. If you start with plot, you end up with morphing your character around your plot, and if you start with plot, the character shapes the plot. I personally prefer the latter, so I start with character.
So there are a few things you should know about your character before you write them, for instance, their gender. That's slightly (not slightly, it's really a lot) important. Let's go over a few!
1. Their Name. Okay, so actually, I have heard of someone who has began their book without a name, but I feel like even a name adds conflict, and personality. Why do you need these for your first draft? Well, actually, I'm not sure you do. But preparation for your first draft in ways like this lets you edit easier later on.
2. Their gender. Yes. This is important. Boy or girl, it matters. I am not really sure if you can bypass this, but either way, I wouldn't. It's a bit of easy prep (It should not take you hours to decide whether or not your MC is a gal or guy) that is pointless to bypass.
3. Their favorite color. Okay, this probably does seem a bit excessive, but I have heard multiple quotes about knowing much more about your character makes them feel more real because they actually have their own opinions and thoughts backing them, even though they may not show it. You know I'm opinionated when I state my view on the Civil War with as much passion as I am wont to do, but you won't know my favorite color, my political position, my favorite book, or anything like that, unless I tell you. However, even though I don't tell you what they are, you still (should. I promise I'm not cardboard) get this sense or knowledge that I have a favorite color, political position, and a favorite book. The same goes for a fiction character, because we're trying to help the reader trick their minds into thinking they're not reading fiction, but instead, living in fantasy. The characters should have things like a favorite color (among other favorites [my friends will tell you that this is my favorite introductory question. What is your favorite everything]). Again, this you could probably skip, but knowing the most about your character before sending them into their story is better, because weaving personality into an already woven work is a lot harder than weaving it as you weave the work.
4. What they look like. I'm sorry, yes I did say things you need to know earlier, but I actually do consider these all necessary when I make characters. I'll go on Pinterest and find who looks like them, then I'll save that mental image in my head, as well as to my board. Why do this? Because as your readers read, they don't hear the name, they see the face. Our brains remember things so much better when we have a mental image of it. If you, as the writer, don't see their face every time you type their name, picturing how they act in the scene, then you probably don't know what they look like enough to keep that mental image in your head, which means the readers don't either, which means they're probably seeing a blur when they think of the character, which ruins the illusion that they're in a real place. This can be edited in later, but again, it's so much harder to put it in later, because it's part of the character's fabric of reality.
5. Their MBTI (optional). See, this time I put optional down. But I do highly recommend it. Knowing their MBTI is very helpful in creating a cast for your character so they don't occasionally slip out of character and shake the reality of the book. (I believe I've said it before, but I'll do so again, I don't believe that using whatever site you're using says you are [i.e. INFP] as a cast for you. You can be whatever you want to be, as long as you're not being fake, but characters are a different thing because in reality, they are fake things pretending to be real, and in the long run, you decide what they do, not them.)
So I like to take all the information I deem necessary and I like to spill it out onto a single page. I'll give you an example of one of my character sheets (I make them even if they don't have a book they belong to.)
SAGE OWENS- ENTJ
Female; 22; Ginger hair; Pale skin; British; Freckles; 5'5; 120lbs (Yes, I know the Brits use a different measuring system for weight); ... Despite her TJ (Of the ENTJ) part of appearing evil, she's actually a good girl at heart, and always endeavors to see things from other people's perspective, even though she mostly fails. She's very smart, though she never planned on following her parents' plan of several doctorates. Instead, she simply decided on a doctorate in engineering...She hasn't got time for relationships, since her parents siphon money off her like a blood bat, but she secretly hopes that one day a tolerable man would come along. ... She doesn't make jokes often, but when she does, you'd probably miss them. Emerald eyes; thin upper lip, thick bottom; round face; long legs, short torso; delicate skin. She's allergic to dairy, and doesn't like it anyways. She adores flowers, but doesn't tell anyone that. Born February second.
So why did I give you half my info load on one of my characters? As an example. When she is in a book, you will probably never know she loves flowers, or is allergic to dairy. So why in the world is it there? Because it adds to her, giving her a richness she wouldn't have if I simply put:
SAGE OWENS
Female; 22; Ginger hair; Pale skin; British; Freckles; 5'5; 120lbs (Yes, I know the Brits use a different measuring system for weight); Emerald eyes; thin upper lip, thick bottom; round face; long legs, short torso; delicate skin.
One feels more real, doesn't it? Writing the latter Sage Owens would be hard because I wouldn't know her. Writing the former would be much easier, having spent time with her.
So what are your thoughts? Do you like to think of plot or character first? How do you get to know your characters? Let me know in the comments!
Viola June HFA-DGN
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Monday, September 28, 2015
Flash Fiction
Hey all! So today I was thinking about Flash Fiction, and all, a lot, a few, or none of you may be wondering what Flash Fiction is, so I'll start out with a short description of it: "fiction that is extremely brief, typically only a few hundred words or fewer in its entirety." If you look "Flash Fiction" up in the search box on Google, that is literally what you get.
So why would one write flash fiction when they can write novels, or short stories?
1. Practice. They are practice for quite a lot of things, actually. I have a small problem with condensing everything I say, so flash fiction for me is easier than for the normal writer, so how would I use it to practice? By expanding it into a short story. What I do is I write the flash fiction, then I stretch the story out into 7.5k, or something akin to that. For those of you who have problems with making your stories too long, you can use Flash Fiction to practice being concise.
2. Satisfaction. I believe satisfaction is very important in the writing world. I don't like those "How to write faster" or "Write a book in a week" or "How to get paid easy for your writing" or stuff like that because I believe that you've got to work for your daily bread. There is no easy way out. "Nothing ever comes to anyone that is worth having, except as a result of hard work." -Booker T. Washington. However, if you spend 8 years writing one book, you never feel like you're accomplishing anything. If you write and complete a short story, or flash fiction in a week (whilst still working on your current novel project), then you feel like you got something done, which should give you more energy to continue on with your project. Anyways, it works for me.
3. You Gain Experience. Yep, I said it. Exp. You know, in video games (let's use Minecraft as an example) you do stuff to gain experience, or "Exp". In Minecraft when you mine coal, which you need constantly, you get experience, but when you mine iron, which you don't need, and you don't gain exp when you mine it. You need to practice writing, and as you write short stories, or flash fiction, either one, you get experience in developing character, plot, and setting, and you can practice with more different situations because you don't need as much time to complete one.
So my suggestion to you, if you want to write some flash fiction, is to get out and research a bit (Before I put up my own post about flash fiction, of course) about it. They are easy to write, and don't take that much time to write, at all. Seriously, just 15 minutes of your day to write 250 words, or half an hour to write 500, or whatever your WPM (Word per minute) is, it's not a lot of time. Even a Hemingway (6-word story) is considered flash fiction. You could utilize dishwashing to think up a story in six words, then edit and revise this six word sentence later. While washing dishes. That is an incredibly efficient way to use your time. Of course, there are times when vegetables seem like they have a good idea of life and you just wish to join them, and so you use dishwashing time as veggie time, and in that case, you'll get no judgement from me, actually I do that sometimes too.
Anyways, what do you think? Have you tried Flash Fiction? Let me know in the comments section!
Viola June HFA-DGN
So why would one write flash fiction when they can write novels, or short stories?
1. Practice. They are practice for quite a lot of things, actually. I have a small problem with condensing everything I say, so flash fiction for me is easier than for the normal writer, so how would I use it to practice? By expanding it into a short story. What I do is I write the flash fiction, then I stretch the story out into 7.5k, or something akin to that. For those of you who have problems with making your stories too long, you can use Flash Fiction to practice being concise.
2. Satisfaction. I believe satisfaction is very important in the writing world. I don't like those "How to write faster" or "Write a book in a week" or "How to get paid easy for your writing" or stuff like that because I believe that you've got to work for your daily bread. There is no easy way out. "Nothing ever comes to anyone that is worth having, except as a result of hard work." -Booker T. Washington. However, if you spend 8 years writing one book, you never feel like you're accomplishing anything. If you write and complete a short story, or flash fiction in a week (whilst still working on your current novel project), then you feel like you got something done, which should give you more energy to continue on with your project. Anyways, it works for me.
3. You Gain Experience. Yep, I said it. Exp. You know, in video games (let's use Minecraft as an example) you do stuff to gain experience, or "Exp". In Minecraft when you mine coal, which you need constantly, you get experience, but when you mine iron, which you don't need, and you don't gain exp when you mine it. You need to practice writing, and as you write short stories, or flash fiction, either one, you get experience in developing character, plot, and setting, and you can practice with more different situations because you don't need as much time to complete one.
So my suggestion to you, if you want to write some flash fiction, is to get out and research a bit (Before I put up my own post about flash fiction, of course) about it. They are easy to write, and don't take that much time to write, at all. Seriously, just 15 minutes of your day to write 250 words, or half an hour to write 500, or whatever your WPM (Word per minute) is, it's not a lot of time. Even a Hemingway (6-word story) is considered flash fiction. You could utilize dishwashing to think up a story in six words, then edit and revise this six word sentence later. While washing dishes. That is an incredibly efficient way to use your time. Of course, there are times when vegetables seem like they have a good idea of life and you just wish to join them, and so you use dishwashing time as veggie time, and in that case, you'll get no judgement from me, actually I do that sometimes too.
Anyways, what do you think? Have you tried Flash Fiction? Let me know in the comments section!
Viola June HFA-DGN
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Thursday, September 10, 2015
Journaling for Writers
Hey guys! Today I would like to share with you a bit about journaling, how it impacts a writer's life, and my own (failed) attempts at it.
So, journaling. To me it's like a little light in the distance I can never seem to reach, but I never stop reaching for it. I think my record for amount of days journaled in a row is about 7. Which is really kind of pitiful. I have tried so many different methods, like just journaling on important days, keeping my journal next to my Bible so when I read at night I won't forget to journal either, keeping my journal in my purse, etc. I fail, every single time. (I'll have you know my current method of trying not to forget is keeping my journal on my desk right on top of the notebook I use all the time. Plus, my journal is so pretty right now that it's really hard to resist it and get to actual work, so maybe that'll help). So why in the world do I try so hard at journaling even when I've failed so many times? From school assignments to personal assignments, it doesn't matter, I still fail. So why do I still try? Because I believe journaling is a great asset for writing. Not like, because it gets your creative juices flowing (though it might do that too, as a warm up to your actual writing), and I know that looking back on something time after time doesn't always inspire ideas, but every so often, your brain is in the right mood and BAM. Amazing story idea from something you wrote a year or two ago and had read tens of times over.
Another benefit of journaling is it's very good for working on your descriptive abilities, but for the most part, I think working on that inside your book instead of inside your journal is the better option.
My friends will tell you that I don't like to delete anything writing related. We are working on a project together and our "Archive" page is over 100 pages long just from two months of work and chats and stuff, merely because I didn't want anything to be deleted. I wanted to go back over it all years from now and see how far we had come. Now how in the world does this relate to journaling? For the same reason. I don't like to forget stuff, but I simply don't have room in my head to keep day to day events rattling around up there. I have much more important stuff to remember (like the taste of that delicious cup of tea I had this morning, or something), including story ideas that were inspired on the spur of the moment.
I think that having the option to look back on your life in writing is a great resource for inspiration and writing. Maybe at one point you journaled when the anger boiling up inside you was almost unbearable. Now you look back and remember that anger from an unbiased PoV and you can translate that anger into an actual character, and because the feelings you gave the character were real, more than likely, the readers will feel that at that moment the character was especially relatable, because they too have felt that way when they're angry, and real, because the feelings, though not in an actual person, CAME from an actual person.
So I believe journaling is amazing for story inspiration, but I also think that you can get too much of it. I don't like to spend more than ten minutes in mine, writing, for the most part, no more than a page. Mostly because I like to save paper and time by not rambling on about my amazing cup of tea, but also because I don't want to spend an hour writing something that isn't important, like my amazing cup of tea, compared to writing an hour of something that IS important, like my actual current project.
How about you? What are your feelings in regards to journaling? Do you feel it's useless, or useful?
Viola June HFA-DGN
So, journaling. To me it's like a little light in the distance I can never seem to reach, but I never stop reaching for it. I think my record for amount of days journaled in a row is about 7. Which is really kind of pitiful. I have tried so many different methods, like just journaling on important days, keeping my journal next to my Bible so when I read at night I won't forget to journal either, keeping my journal in my purse, etc. I fail, every single time. (I'll have you know my current method of trying not to forget is keeping my journal on my desk right on top of the notebook I use all the time. Plus, my journal is so pretty right now that it's really hard to resist it and get to actual work, so maybe that'll help). So why in the world do I try so hard at journaling even when I've failed so many times? From school assignments to personal assignments, it doesn't matter, I still fail. So why do I still try? Because I believe journaling is a great asset for writing. Not like, because it gets your creative juices flowing (though it might do that too, as a warm up to your actual writing), and I know that looking back on something time after time doesn't always inspire ideas, but every so often, your brain is in the right mood and BAM. Amazing story idea from something you wrote a year or two ago and had read tens of times over.
Another benefit of journaling is it's very good for working on your descriptive abilities, but for the most part, I think working on that inside your book instead of inside your journal is the better option.
My friends will tell you that I don't like to delete anything writing related. We are working on a project together and our "Archive" page is over 100 pages long just from two months of work and chats and stuff, merely because I didn't want anything to be deleted. I wanted to go back over it all years from now and see how far we had come. Now how in the world does this relate to journaling? For the same reason. I don't like to forget stuff, but I simply don't have room in my head to keep day to day events rattling around up there. I have much more important stuff to remember (like the taste of that delicious cup of tea I had this morning, or something), including story ideas that were inspired on the spur of the moment.
I think that having the option to look back on your life in writing is a great resource for inspiration and writing. Maybe at one point you journaled when the anger boiling up inside you was almost unbearable. Now you look back and remember that anger from an unbiased PoV and you can translate that anger into an actual character, and because the feelings you gave the character were real, more than likely, the readers will feel that at that moment the character was especially relatable, because they too have felt that way when they're angry, and real, because the feelings, though not in an actual person, CAME from an actual person.
So I believe journaling is amazing for story inspiration, but I also think that you can get too much of it. I don't like to spend more than ten minutes in mine, writing, for the most part, no more than a page. Mostly because I like to save paper and time by not rambling on about my amazing cup of tea, but also because I don't want to spend an hour writing something that isn't important, like my amazing cup of tea, compared to writing an hour of something that IS important, like my actual current project.
How about you? What are your feelings in regards to journaling? Do you feel it's useless, or useful?
Viola June HFA-DGN
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